it doesnt feel right

I was doing my usual randomly click and add things to avs and I came across what I think is the start of a good preset but its missing something. I just cant decide what it is that im missing.

any suggestions will be welcome.


Thank you.

I'm on to change it a bit - but don't complain if something completely diffrent comes out... 😛

here's a suggestion of what you can do,

yeah, i knew what to do, here is the result: