my first pack: Particles

I'm working on my first pack called Particles and thease are my first 5 presets.

Just to warn you, this is noob grade work.

Try doing something without Moving Particle, its easily one of the most used noob effects.

Beginner Works

Imaginary: Looking good than the others (I think..). Anyway, try replacing the Render/Moving Particle by using Render/Texer II or Render/SSC.

The others, nice but as jheriko had said it's a noob grade work.

p.s.: Try using another interactive render..

This is my first pack and thus I'm a beginner. I had thought making a pack by just using Moving Particles then maybe when I learned how to code SuperScopes and the other coding effects, I would replace them. that's why I called this Particles, anyway I like moving particles and just because it's easy to use dosn't mean you shouldn't use it.

thanks for your comments, I know you have seen hundreds of these noob presets before.

Originally posted by usgroup1_winamp
thanks for your comments, I know you have seen hundreds of these noob presets before.

Thanks for appreciating that, I'm sure I come over as quite rude and discouraging most of the time 😛

Well the color & effect work is fairly nice in my opinion, but yeah, the whole Moving Particles + Swirly Movements is as basic as it gets, basicly 😛

Also remember to give credit in each of the presets that use others work, not just in one preset.

Hello, new and enthusiastic member! You have discovered AVS, that is wonder.. a fuckit

made It's intro

I just downloaded the pack ... it's really nice.Kepp'em going.I think that one of ur presets was a remix of mine.You added some color and it's really nice.Good work

Originally posted by usgroup1_winamp
made It's intro

That kinda "intro" was awesome! 🙂

another simple moving particle preset

7 - Smooth Particles

just another moving particle preset with smooth movements and nice colors

Hello, i read your info on your pack i'm quite impressed with it even though Jheriko is right. i'm still a noob at this aswell but look at my package called Nanakiwurkz it has some great examples of the super scope and texerII ability goto http://www.winamp.com/plugins/browse...=P&category=11 and it'll be the first one with 1700 somethin downloads.

I finished the pack, here is the full pack ready for your reviews 🙂

Actually, these are very good for newbieish work. You've pulled off some pretty good colourschemes with basic effects. I liked most of them, and I particularly loved the colourscheme on Watercolour/Smooth Particles. It's a 3.5ish pack I guess.

Fireball is boring, and does not improve in any way on the original. You might like it, but I'd get rid of it.

If you used someone's code in a preset, credit him in the same preset. Did you make the lowest DM in Astronomer's Dream yourself ? If not, and it looks so, you should've done that (sorry if I'm wrong).

Originally posted by Doggy Dog
If you used someone's code in a preset, credit him in the same preset. Did you make the lowest DM in Astronomer's Dream yourself ? If not, and it looks so, you should've done that (sorry if I'm wrong).

That DM was originally made by UnConeD. Although I modified that a lot, I should have credited him, sorry for that.

Thanks for your review.