I think I've finally made one that won't be flamed.
Okay, so it's not exactly "Bleeding edge" but, it's a hell of a lot better than my last one.

A quick question though, is there any "Easy" way for me to smooth it out a little bit? If you watch it you'll notice that at certain times it really vibrates rapidly and sort of ruins the effect.

Sorry I'm not to good at this yet. But every one I make gets better and better.

Someday......