Mr.Klass

3rd May 2003 04:49 UTC

Contructive Critisisim ( AVS )
Hey,

It's really no where close to what i have seen everyone here do...but i thought i would get some condtructive critsisim from some of you.

Enjoy, Lots of funky colours.

Raz

3rd May 2003 05:26 UTC

Well you've got further than a lot of noobs by not giving us all a seizure ;) good job for that. This is a good noob preset because i can see you're experimenting with movements. Try to experiment with some simple scopes next. Have a look around the forums for tutorials. The tips and tricks threads in the main forum would be a good place to start. Ateros primer, soon to be updated for the past six months.

Some tips: "i" is only a set variable in scopes. It doesn't do anything in movements unless you set a variable with the name "i". A unique tone tone sets the tone for things before it in the list so it doesn't do anything at the start. I suspect you want the screen to start orange so you want a render/clear screen to start.

Overall it's a very noob preet but it's watchable and not stupidly fast or bright. keep avsing and welcome to the forums :)

shreyas_potnis

3rd May 2003 11:30 UTC

you can achieve some more movements using another dm and rotating and zooming this thing, keep going on :up:

Mr.Klass

3rd May 2003 14:52 UTC

Thank's for the tips.


Its just Dm's look very hard....i have tried a primer and i didnt really get it. any tips for that?

Jaheckelsafar

3rd May 2003 23:33 UTC

Just mess around. That's what we all did. Try and pick other's DMs apart.

dirkdeftly

4th May 2003 05:22 UTC

"a primer"...my primer?